A downloadable game for Windows and macOS

WARNING-This game has gore and blood.

 This is my first visual novel ever, but i spent a lot of time and effort into it.

Also please let me know if there is any bugs in the game, thank you.

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windows_20171210_11287.zip 71 MB
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mac_20171210_113030.zip 74 MB

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HEY THERE AND YES I AM SCREAMING FOR NO REASON.........I MAY HAVE BROKEN MY KEYBOARD AND NOW CAPS WON´T TURN OFF

ANYWAY HERE´S THE SECOND PART OF THE GAMEPLAY:

PS: I LOVED IT

Thank you for playing my game, my future games will be much longer and more captivating. I appreciate the support, and i really enjoyed your reaction.

The positive comments are nice, however not all of them are so true.
You did quite a good job on programming, since it was your first VN, but it was honestly pretty weak story wise. Would recommend you to focus MORE on the story if you wanna keep doing visual novels. Both, the choices and story weren't realistic, characters weren't really captivaiting either. None of them had real personality, I get it, it's a short game, but the way MC reacted and/or thought was unrealistic.
Hope you don't mind the honest feedback, good luck with future projects.

I truly appreciate the honesty, i know there are some things on the story that i could do better. But i just started coding and it was surprisingly hard working with the story, even with my mistakes, i am happy on how it turned out for my first time making a game. 

OWO I am speechless with this game.

It starts in a weird way and makes it seem like we know whats going to happen but then it slaps ya with the horrible truth.....Truly amazing

Loved it and made a 2 part game play 

here is the first part: 

You did a wonderful job creating this. It's such a cute game, and I love the song in the beginning, it's too adorable. The only negative thing was the grammar but it wasn't much and it didn't distract from the story.  Over all I enjoyed it a lot and hope to see more from you.

Thank you for the support, i did my best to fix the grammar.

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Hey there, for your first ever visual novel I think you did a pretty good job! The characters and story were pretty interesting and I appreciate the implementation of multiple endings. I really like the music used in the title screen and throughout the game. 

There were a few grammar errors here and there, but they didn't deter me from enjoying the game.

Overall it was a pretty good visual novel, and I encourage you to keep on creating!

I also made a short let's play of the game, I hope you don't mind.

Cheers and best wishes.

Thank you, i really appreciate it and i do plan on making more games in the future.

Pretty neat!